Growing up in the South, I used the phrase "big ol'" a lot. Big ol' truck. Big ol' house. Big ol' party. The phrase was one we used when the word "big" just wasn't descriptive enough.
I think the following suggestions qualify as Big Ol' Tips. Look around the Web and you'll find plenty of good sales letter writing tips. But "big" just doesn't do these justice.
Here are three big ol' tips for better sales letters.
Big Ol' Tip #1)
Be redundant. Then, say the same thing over again.
Just because you state your most powerful benefit in the headline doesn't mean you shouldn't say it over again. If you are writing a long sales letter (especially one made for quick scanning), you should repeat the main benefits to make sure you get your point across. After all, many readers need to read the same thing several times before they catch on.
Big Ol' Tip #2)
Focus on the guarantee. I promise you won't regret it.
Your readers are reading for one very simple reason: they're looking for a reason to buy. Give them the best reason possible. One good reason for buying is the assurance that customers will be protected against making a bad decision. If they're interested in your product, and making a purchase has no negative consequences, then you've got a sale. A guarantee removes negative consequences.
Big Ol' Tip #3)
Conceal the price. How? I'll tell you in a minute.
Don't state the price up-front. Reveal the price only after the customer calls a number, sends in a reply card, makes contact by e-mail, or reads (or scans) all the way to the end of your sales letter. By not revealing the price immediately, you have a chance to demonstrate to readers the value of what's behind the price before they have a chance to set their mind against it. (Note: If low price is your product's primary selling point, this tip might not apply. Test and see.)
These tips will improve your sales letter by making it more readable, more persuasive, and less intimidating to your audience. Use them in a well written piece and you'll see a big ol' increase in your response rates.
About The Author
Matthew Cobb is a freelance copywriter in the Dallas/ Fort Worth, TX, area. For information, visit his professional site at http://copy.cobbwriting.com or call 817.966.RITE (7483). This article may be reproduced, as long as the the resource box is included and notification is provided to the author.
![]() |
|
![]() |
|
![]() |
|
![]() |
Freebees--Freebees--FreebeesWHY PAY, WHEN "YOU CAN HAVE IT FOR FREE?"There are... Read More
For technology companies, service after the sale has emerged on... Read More
Several weeks ago, I conducted a "Mastering the Cold Call"... Read More
Here are four simple things you can do to take... Read More
"If you do anything foolish or try to get out... Read More
In the last decade, the Internet has become a major... Read More
Authors/publishers are great at getting their books written. Entrepreneurs know... Read More
Is cold calling dead? And if laws are being passed... Read More
Growing up in the South, I used the phrase "big... Read More
With hundreds of direct sales companies out there, how do... Read More
To be more effective at developing relationships, one should always... Read More
Back in the days when I sold for CTV and... Read More
Do you have 5, 10, or 20 years of sales... Read More
Ever wish that your presentations could be as much fun... Read More
A white paper supports PR, marketing and sales because it... Read More
If you live in England then you will already be... Read More
The sales letter you can't put down?the advertising copy that... Read More
American consumers have spoken and have done so loudly registering... Read More
So often sales men and woman are the very people... Read More
When you are in the business of sales, among the... Read More
Female mannequins are very common in clothing stores. They are... Read More
As I become more successful with my internet business I... Read More
Any company in today's global economy must eventually face the... Read More
Prospecting is the engine that propels anyone in sales. Without... Read More
I've been training in countries outside the U.S. recently, and... Read More
Everyone wants the best possible value in every transaction, but... Read More
Want to build a successful incentive program for your company?... Read More
Most consultants I've talked to don't spend any time trying... Read More
After our first half-hour telephone coaching session, when asked what... Read More
This issue's topic was suggested by a sales rep for... Read More
1. Settle On The Right Way ForwardThe purpose of your... Read More
TELEPHONE TECHNIQUESSelling face to face is different from selling on... Read More
You've polished your sales page over and over againuntil it's... Read More
The main reason for buyer resistance and selling stalls boils... Read More
Do you hang up on telemarketers? 9 times out of... Read More
Still more discoveries from the recent studies in behavioral economics:Over-Valuing... Read More
You have all seen them,the sales letters that never ends.... Read More
"Hello, is (pause) puh-TREE-shuh home?"So started my weekend lesson in... Read More
Do you know why your customer won't buy? You've given... Read More
Have you ever asked yourself, now how did I let... Read More
The Technical Revolution has done a lot for us --... Read More
Doing business over meals is a ritual that has existed... Read More
Your prospect is in the market for a widget, just... Read More
You have just walked out of the office of a... Read More
"I was at your site for all of two minutes... Read More
You have a great product, but it's not flying off... Read More
For centuries ? at least since the serpent convinced Eve... Read More
Where many marketing conversations get off-track are the ones you... Read More
Back in the days when I sold for CTV and... Read More
I'll play a seller, using conventional selling methods, selling something... Read More
When it comes to buying mortgage leads, there are many... Read More
When you think about ways to gain repeat business from... Read More
A mobile auto detailer and their profits are tied to... Read More
I've been using a technique that has helped me to... Read More
First - being before all others. Fast - moving or... Read More
If you are in Sales, you have probably heard these... Read More
There are many fund raising ideas on the market today... Read More
I believe that everyone understands that no matter what business... Read More
Would you like an easy way to track the performance... Read More
You've met a new prospect, accurately assessed their needs and... Read More
People ask me, "What should I charge?"I say, "Ask your... Read More
You arrived on time and completed your calculations. You worked... Read More
No matter how big or small your business is and... Read More
Several weeks ago, I conducted a "Mastering the Cold Call"... Read More
An area that can become profitable for many businesses in... Read More
The best of all worlds is to have a product... Read More
Sales |