"Do it!", "Do it now!", or "Do it because..."
Which of these commands is most likely to get the response you want?
If you picked the third, the one that includes 'because', you'd be right. Of course, if you're a parent, aunt, or uncle you may know that already.
The idea behind 'because...' is to provide an explanation or rationalization for the request you're making. In other words, the command or request is not just an arbitrary exercise of power on your part -- it's a reasoned request or command.
In a broader sense, 'because' provides context, which we've often discussed in this newsletter. Context provides a framework for specific communication. For example, "Please review this contract before we mail it out, because a mistake could cost us thousands of dollars."
A number of Internet entrepreneurs report they've tested the use of 'because' in their advertising copy and found it worked. I've used it myself on the home page of Abbott's Communication Letter http://www.abbottletter.com/ where visitors are invited to subscribe.
I haven't tested to see whether or not it makes a difference. But I do know it helps in the copy writing process.
It helps because it pushes me to make a connection between an action and a consequence of that action. For example, "Wear a helmet when you ride your bike, because it will help you avoid head injuries if you fall." In this case, wearing a helmet is the action; avoiding a head injury is the consequence.
One more thought: the word 'because' does not always have to be explicit. It can be implicit or implied, as in "Wear a helmet when you ride your bike, so you won't injure your head if you fall."
Let's consider a few more examples, from various functional perspectives.
Suppose you're a librarian and you want to encourage patrons to expand their reading horizons. So, you post a sign in the Historical Fiction area that reads something like this: "The story here is only half the story. Visit the History shelves, too, and enrich the stories you find here."
The action: look in the History section, as well as the Historical Fiction section. The consequence: you'll learn the story behind the story, enriching your reading of the fictitious stories.
How about a sales example? If you send a sales letter, do you focus on product features and ignore the benefits your readers will reap (believe me, I see a lot of these letters)? If you use 'because' with each feature-- explicitly or implicitly -- you'll force yourself to list benefits as well as product features.
Compare these two pitches: "Now featuring keyboard water coolers with two-gallon capacity!" and "With the two-gallon keyboard water cooler, your keyboard will never overheat, no matter how fast you type."
In summary, using the word 'because' in your message will help you write more persuasive copy and help your readers understand why they should respond to you.
Robert F. Abbott writes and publishes Abbott's Communication Letter. Learn how you can use communication to help achieve your goals, by reading articles or subscribing to this ad-supported newsletter. An excellent resource for leaders and managers, at: http://www.communication-newsletter.com
![]() |
|
![]() |
|
![]() |
|
![]() |
"But this won't work" said Steve. "I've tried it in... Read More
Three seconds. That's what you have to convey your message.... Read More
A great way to gain more local sales is to... Read More
Looking to grow your business? Make sure you have these... Read More
If you're just dipping your toes into the waters of... Read More
NB: You can read part one here: ... Read More
Owning a small business isn't easy, especially if you are... Read More
What benefits will you get from flyers?Flyers are much different... Read More
No, customers aren't bloodsuckers (well, maybe a few are!) and... Read More
There aren't many things in life that you would get... Read More
During the holidays, folks everywhere shop many long hours to... Read More
A brochure can be a great promotional tool, whether it... Read More
The "Unique Selling Proposition" advertising campaign was developed by Reeves... Read More
Being in a quandary prevents you from moving forward in... Read More
I was saddened to hear of the passing of one... Read More
Hopefully we are all adults here, so let's talk about... Read More
There seems to be a never ending argument among marketing... Read More
My mother used to tell me, tongue in cheek, that... Read More
RSS has been around for more than 10 years but... Read More
Corporate marketing groups - especially bandwidth-challenged small-to-mid-sized departments - can... Read More
For centuries and most of the decades in the 20th... Read More
Bob called last week from Phoenix, Arizona with some stunning... Read More
Business cards and greeting cards almost go hand in hand... Read More
"?A powerful agent is the right word?" --Mark TwainAnd what... Read More
One of the easiest, if not the easiest, ways of... Read More
Narrowing your focus to one primary group of people is... Read More
I don't know about you, but I am still waiting... Read More
As discussed in part 1 of this article, "Your Private... Read More
There is a big payoff in being different. When you... Read More
Do you know what Howard Stern... Oprah Winfrey... and Paul... Read More
There are other names given to "Back-End Selling". You may... Read More
Dear Friend:Don't do it.Don't start your fundraising letters with "Dear... Read More
With the advent of spring, trade shows begin to blossom.... Read More
Writing and publishing a successful newsletter is perhaps the most... Read More
To be your own marketing expert you first need to... Read More
Telemarketers... ooohhh... I'll bet we've all got a nice story... Read More
A Complaint? It's a Compliment!What made you mad last week?In... Read More
It's crucial to know your prospects if you want to... Read More
Personal contact with customers is a crucial element in the... Read More
There are many ways to promote your website for free... Read More
Is Advertising Viable?At the turn of the 20th century, department... Read More
Many people have asked me what was the secret to... Read More
One of the greatest challenges to effectively marketing a business... Read More
Effective marketing for the small business begins with market researchIf... Read More
Mortgage marketing to Realtors involves having a crystal clear position... Read More
Ever try to be something for everyone and find no... Read More
Direct mail is a cost-effective way to make sales and... Read More
Recently, I stopped by a new car wash in my... Read More
Strategy #1: Change Your Mindset That's right, change your mindset!... Read More
Do sales come from your ezine regularly? How many well-written... Read More
These ideas are for anyone that has a small budget... Read More
The industry standard for mobile washing is completing the car... Read More
Marketing A Resume BusinessWhen starting a resume business, your marketing... Read More
The usual complaint from companies is that Marketing simply does... Read More
This really and truly is the easiest (and most profitable)... Read More
What is database marketing?Database Marketing is the gathering and storing... Read More
Effective customer newsletters find the right mix of promotional and... Read More
If you want to substantially increase your tourism prospects and... Read More
Traditional marketing and advertising assumes that all of your customers... Read More
RSS has been around for more than 10 years but... Read More
When it comes to your marketing message, the little things... Read More
This list has been compiled as a result of years... Read More
1) They don't fully understand it.Perception: Marketing is advertising. Reality:... Read More
In the age of e-newsletters and e-mail, you may not... Read More
If you have been to expos and trade shows as... Read More
One of the most rewarding, inexpensive, under-used, and effective methods... Read More
Marketing |