The Power of because...

"Do it!", "Do it now!", or "Do it because..."

Which of these commands is most likely to get the response you want?

If you picked the third, the one that includes 'because', you'd be right. Of course, if you're a parent, aunt, or uncle you may know that already.

The idea behind 'because...' is to provide an explanation or rationalization for the request you're making. In other words, the command or request is not just an arbitrary exercise of power on your part -- it's a reasoned request or command.

In a broader sense, 'because' provides context, which we've often discussed in this newsletter. Context provides a framework for specific communication. For example, "Please review this contract before we mail it out, because a mistake could cost us thousands of dollars."

A number of Internet entrepreneurs report they've tested the use of 'because' in their advertising copy and found it worked. I've used it myself on the home page of Abbott's Communication Letter http://www.abbottletter.com/ where visitors are invited to subscribe.

I haven't tested to see whether or not it makes a difference. But I do know it helps in the copy writing process.

It helps because it pushes me to make a connection between an action and a consequence of that action. For example, "Wear a helmet when you ride your bike, because it will help you avoid head injuries if you fall." In this case, wearing a helmet is the action; avoiding a head injury is the consequence.

One more thought: the word 'because' does not always have to be explicit. It can be implicit or implied, as in "Wear a helmet when you ride your bike, so you won't injure your head if you fall."

Let's consider a few more examples, from various functional perspectives.

Suppose you're a librarian and you want to encourage patrons to expand their reading horizons. So, you post a sign in the Historical Fiction area that reads something like this: "The story here is only half the story. Visit the History shelves, too, and enrich the stories you find here."

The action: look in the History section, as well as the Historical Fiction section. The consequence: you'll learn the story behind the story, enriching your reading of the fictitious stories.

How about a sales example? If you send a sales letter, do you focus on product features and ignore the benefits your readers will reap (believe me, I see a lot of these letters)? If you use 'because' with each feature-- explicitly or implicitly -- you'll force yourself to list benefits as well as product features.

Compare these two pitches: "Now featuring keyboard water coolers with two-gallon capacity!" and "With the two-gallon keyboard water cooler, your keyboard will never overheat, no matter how fast you type."

In summary, using the word 'because' in your message will help you write more persuasive copy and help your readers understand why they should respond to you.

Robert F. Abbott writes and publishes Abbott's Communication Letter. Learn how you can use communication to help achieve your goals, by reading articles or subscribing to this ad-supported newsletter. An excellent resource for leaders and managers, at: http://www.communication-newsletter.com

In The News:


pen paper and inkwell


cat break through


Using a Marketing Calendar Template

Owning a small business isn't easy, especially if you are... Read More

Advertising Your Private Practice: Beware of the Problems-Part 1

One of the biggest mistakes coaches, counselors and other healing... Read More

The Art of the Business Card

Use a business card as a note pad for recording... Read More

A Business In One Sentence

Marketing expert and author, Geoffrey Moore, has a useful fill-in-the-blank... Read More

Effective Lead Generation

How to Gain your Prospective Clients' Attention and Generate the... Read More

Small Business Marketing Tip - Focus on a Niche or Target Market

I think selling and marketing today often feels a bit... Read More

Successful Non-for-Profit Fundraising Letters Share Eight Qualities

You'll be encouraged to know that the art of writing... Read More

The Top Seven Marketing Mistakes

In my view, nearly all government statistics about reasons for... Read More

Qualify Prospects Using Direct Mail Marketing

When a prospect responds to your lead generation sales letter,... Read More

Thinking About More Business

What does an old Russian joke have... Read More

How to Brief a Marketing Agency

A new client recently emailed us a brief here at... Read More

Top Web Site Blunders by Coaches, Consultants and Experts

Of all the web sites belonging to coaches, consultants and... Read More

10 Powerful Marketing Tips

1. Print your best small ad on a postcard and... Read More

Trade Show Display Booth ? A Marvelous Contact System

Trade show booths are one of the best direct contact... Read More

9 Highly Effective Marketing Tips

Here are 9 low-cost but highly effective marketing tips to... Read More

Terrific Titles, Happenin Headlines

You've probably heard the slogan, "You never get a second... Read More

Self-Promotion on a Zero Budget

Recently, I've received a few e-mails from people asking me... Read More

7 Tips to Grab New Clients

As a business professional, you probably realize the value of... Read More

Four Essential Marketing Plan Components

Preparing a Marketing Plan for your product or service is... Read More

Using a Contact List Profitably- Part Two

Besides a survey, your contact list can be used to... Read More

The Value of a Customer

The Driver of All Marketing EffortsYou need to determine what... Read More

Chamber Of Commerce Meetings

If you run a small business you should be a... Read More

Turning The Casual Scanner Into A Buyer

The world is full... Read More

Sell Your Name, Not Your Product

Do you know what the majority of people sell? I... Read More

Set Your Business Apart With A Unique Selling Proposition

Unless your company has absolutely no competition now or in... Read More

Trade Show Marketing ? Getting Prepared for the Big Event

With the increase in number of tradeshows being held across... Read More

Professional Marketing

Have you looked for marketing advice on the internet recently?... Read More

Profitable Marketing Programs (Part 1)

Deciding whether a particular marketing program is profitable to your... Read More

Marketing Tips: Free First

When people think about promoting their business, the first thought... Read More

Direct Mail Response Rates Mislead if You are Careless

I could tell you that the average temperature in the... Read More

Explode Your Sales With Free & Exclusive Content

Offering free and exclusive content to ezine publishers and webmasters... Read More

2 Great, Free Techniques to Get Customers to Come to You, Not the Other Way Around

Here is a powerful tip on how to substantially increase... Read More

AIDA From A Different View - I Call It the 5 Ws

My childhood was my foundation for how I write and... Read More