Have you ever chosen to pay attention to someone just because they were so self-absorbed they didn't even know you were in the room? Of course not! We pay attention to people who take an interest in us. If we want our readers to pay attention to us, we better pay attention to them!
The people we come in contact with through the course of our jobs are human beings with feelings, needs, wants, and desires. When we take the time to figure out how what we have to offer fills one or more of their needs, we discover the way to grab-and keep-their attention. After all, if we don't get their attention we can't expect them to read long enough to get our message.
Understanding the Need
Okay, sounds simple enough. But how do we get their attention? How do we figure out how to tune in to their needs-especially when we can't or don't want to know them personally? There's the challenge. Think in terms of what you'd want if the same offer were made to you. Would you buy your own product or concept if the marketing material for it focused on how the manufacturer ultimately benefits by your purchase? No.
For instance, think of all those advertisements you hear and see that offer you a variety of insurance. What is the reason those insurance companies are in business? To make money. After all, if they didn't make money on the products they sell they wouldn't be in business! But will you and I purchase their products if they told us they designed this great new insurance just so they'd have something else to sell? No way!
We will, however, buy that product if they can show us how it fills a gap we are currently experiencing-or if they make us aware of a gap that may occur in our futures. They focus, ultimately, on the benefit to us as the reason they developed this new type of insurance . . . because they know the benefit to us is what gets us to buy.
What if you have to notify employees of a change in a policy that affects them? Maybe it's not a policy change they're going to like, such as a reduction in the amount of personal time they can take. How are you going to find a benefit to sell that situation? Seems tough, but the benefits are there. Let's see if we can brainstorm a few.
Brainstorming the Benefits
To get at the benefit to your readers, begin thinking about the "why" of this policy change to begin with. Is it to save the company money by reducing lost employee work time? Let's say the answer to this question is "yes." In that case, what would be the downside or the consequence of the company leaving the personal time benefit as it is? Perhaps the current system is costing so much money that the company is considering laying off employees to reduce costs. If the personal time policy changed to reduce the amount of time available for employees to take at their own discretion, then when an employee did take time beyond the hours allowed they would be taken without pay. Therefore, the company would save money that would in the long run allow them to retain more employees.
In order to sell this policy change, the job becomes to convey this information to the employees so they understand the need to change the policy. Most resistance to change and most conflict arises from audiences not having enough information about the changes being imposed on them. Making them aware of the benefit to them of reducing personal time may help them to understand the policy change. Increasing their awareness, however, does not guarantee they will be happy with the change. But it does help us lay the groundwork for getting the change across while encountering least resistance.
Asking the Right Questions
When you begin writing your documents, consciously focusing on the benefit to the reader, ask yourself these questions:
? What is the benefit to the reader of reading this document or of doing what I'm asking?
? What is the consequence if they don't?
Continue asking the consequence question until you dig down two or three layers into the topic to discover the truest consequence. Once the consequence is established, it's easier to begin looking for the benefit of doing what you suggest. Consider the following scenario:
We've developed a homeowner's insurance policy to cover roof repairs for our customers who live in the Northern Nevada desert. What is the benefit to them of this policy? The customer's roof will be repaired through insurance should it become damaged. Is that persuasive enough? I don't think so. So let's look at it from the consequences side.
Last year, 430 homes in the urban areas surrounding Reno were damaged by high winds. Of these 430 homes, only 23 were covered by policies that directly covered roof damage. The remaining 407 homes had no coverage. Consequently, their owners had to pay for their repairs out of pocket. Of these 407, 348 homeowners were unable to pay for the repairs without going into debt. The majority of them had to refinance their existing homes, take equity loans, or seek some other form of financing to make the repairs. This set them back in their goals toward reaching their retirement funding targets. It's estimated that 80 percent of these homeowners will have to work beyond the point at which they had planned to retire in order to repay the debt for repairing their homes. Should they remain uncovered by insurance for this type of damage and a similar event occur, they will sink deeper into debt-when an affordable addendum policy was available to them prior to the first event.
Putting it into Words
If we wrote a document marketing this policy to our clients, telling them this entire scenario would be manipulative and cheap. Most of our savvy readers would know what we're doing and quit reading long before they found any benefit to them.
Instead, we use this scenario to help us find the selling point in the scenario. The selling point is to buy the policy now so that their retirement income will be intact. Rather than running the risk of needing to take out a loan for home repairs, purchasing this policy will ensure that should the worst happen they will be covered and need only make a simple telephone call to speed help their way.
Wrapping it Up
Whether it's an insurance policy, a change in employee policy, an attempt to enlist support for an upcoming corporate event, coaching an employee to modify behavior, or pulling together a team for a project, focusing on the benefit to the individuals involved will more often encourage and create cooperation where before only resistance existed. Find the specific and personal benefit to your readers, and focus the document around that point. This will ensure your document has a reader-focus because you are focusing on what's important to them.
About the author:
Dr. Tracy Peterson Turner works with businesses that want to improve communication among managers, staff, and clients. She is an expert in written and oral communication. Her presentations and workshops help individuals and corporations meet their communication goals. Find out more about Tracy and her company, Managerial Impact, by visiting http://www.Mgr-Impact.com
![]() |
|
![]() |
|
![]() |
|
![]() |
Personal marketing makes it easier to sell, by building relationships... Read More
TIP #1: Avoid the "Too Much Information" Syndrome... Read More
Research shows that the gay and lesbian market is worth... Read More
Many sales problems can be solved by improved marketing. Selling... Read More
The Marketing Plan section of the business plan demonstrates how... Read More
Last month we looked at what you need to do... Read More
Do you have Communication breakdown?How are you communicating with your... Read More
In early 1992, President George H.W. Bush was riding high.... Read More
As an entrepreneur involved in selling and/or promotion... Read More
1) Word of mouth is the most cost-effective, powerful form... Read More
If you are operating a business from your home and... Read More
The N-word! We all know the value of networking and... Read More
It seems nowadays every marketing guru and their brother-in-law has... Read More
Unless your company has absolutely no competition now or in... Read More
How do you answer the seemingly easy question, "What do... Read More
I want to share with you a story. This story... Read More
A BIG MAIL SHOULD CONTAIN:At least three to four Mail... Read More
Sponsorship is the fastest growing form of marketing in the... Read More
When people think about promoting their business, the first thought... Read More
When you take a piece of gold to a pawn... Read More
When studying the demographics of an area for a business... Read More
The basic lead generation process is pretty much the same... Read More
If you're just dipping your toes into the waters of... Read More
Cinch your success with 8-second leaders! Step into the saddle... Read More
The industry standard for mobile washing is completing the car... Read More
Are your direct mail response rates lower than you expect?... Read More
Tips on writing great copy for your marketing efforts.It's just... Read More
If you don't get this right, you can just forget... Read More
Recently, I've received a few e-mails from people asking me... Read More
If you want to get consistent results from your marketing,... Read More
As a massage therapist, your income is usually limited by... Read More
It is a well known web site marketing strategy: To... Read More
Is Advertising Viable?At the turn of the 20th century, department... Read More
A powerful consumer market with annual spending power exceeding $350... Read More
Most businesses realize that they are simply a click away... Read More
Part 1 of this series described five critical components for... Read More
TIP #1: Avoid the "Too Much Information" Syndrome... Read More
Have you ever chosen to pay attention to someone just... Read More
Every professional or consultant knows that clients typically hire people... Read More
Jay Conrad Levinson coined the term guerrilla marketing, which I... Read More
I knew this one would get your attention. How can... Read More
Even the world's best marketing strategy won't work for you... Read More
Traditional marketing and advertising assumes that all of your customers... Read More
The steps to creating an effective marketing plan begin with... Read More
excite v. 1 a: to call to activity b: to... Read More
Are there really ways you can get valuable marketing exposure... Read More
I don't mean you, I mean the YOU that is... Read More
Special event and a special recipe- hand it out on... Read More
Many people think that the quality of any graphic design... Read More
When you want to win and woo new clients with... Read More
To read the beginning of this special report, you can... Read More
A brochure can be a wonderful promotional tool for a... Read More
There isn't a day that goes by that I don't... Read More
Recently, a client asked what he could do to help... Read More
Owning a small business isn't easy, especially if you are... Read More
THE GREAT BRITISH TRADITION OF STREET MARKETS IS UPHELD AT... Read More
Why give freebies?We have all seen freebies at trade shows... Read More
Everywhere you go on the Internet you find the words,... Read More
Direct mail can be one of the most effective tactics... Read More
The movie, "Field of Dreams" opens with a farmer standing... Read More
You couldn't help but be captivated by the unbelievably cute... Read More
Online Communities are all over the Internet and attract lots... Read More
Once you have the attention of a business prospect, at... Read More
It's no secret that using a job site sign can... Read More
Voice Mail is a classy name for "answer Machine". Problem... Read More
In just one month three California vineyards have introduced new... Read More
Marketing |